This was an interesting write not one I understand. Some poetry is like that to me, so don't be offended. I have one suggestion I am unsure if you did this purposely but I think you mean hear when you say So I can here the worlds tone.

Ah yes thank you it was a late night

Powerful piece, filled with so much meaning. I love it from the beginning to the end. It paints such equally beautiful and heartbreaking picture.
Whole poem is truly unique and refreshing. It seems simple, but it hides so many deeper emotions.
Overall, greatly written piece.