by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Jan 7, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My mind takes place in another dimension |
by Lonely Rider
Different way of speaking out your mind ... and very intriguing also... loved the metaphors you have used ... i loved the starting part more... it was more captivating ... and some lines really caught my attention... |
by Faithless
You just let your poems run wild the way it should be and let others interprete it. I like the nonsensical imaginary that your have poured out from your head to create this piece.Though the things may not make sense but it was unique in a way that you have combine everything together and make it rhyme.Well i hope you could understand my comments as much as i can understand ur poem lol But u did an excellent job 5/5 |
Thats an excellent poem Jen and a very clever one too i might add, and yeah each person seems to have a different take on what his or her perfect ideals are and at the end of it all we all turn to dust. |
by oddi tea
I love it. Really crazy insane, and I love the way you incoperated all the old saying in like "raining cats and dogs' and 'Looking a free horse in the mouth'. It also made me laugh at the horses and hogs bit. Thats pure genious! Great job and good luck on the contest! 5/5 |