I love it. Really crazy insane, and I love the way you incoperated all the old saying in like "raining cats and dogs' and 'Looking a free horse in the mouth'. It also made me laugh at the horses and hogs bit. Thats pure genious! Great job and good luck on the contest! 5/5

Thats an excellent poem Jen and a very clever one too i might add, and yeah each person seems to have a different take on what his or her perfect ideals are and at the end of it all we all turn to dust.
Good one Jen and a most enjoyable and different read
5/5

Grant

You just let your poems run wild the way it should be and let others interprete it. I like the nonsensical imaginary that your have poured out from your head to create this piece.Though the things may not make sense but it was unique in a way that you have combine everything together and make it rhyme.Well i hope you could understand my comments as much as i can understand ur poem lol But u did an excellent job 5/5

Different way of speaking out your mind ... and very intriguing also... loved the metaphors you have used ... i loved the starting part more... it was more captivating ... and some lines really caught my attention...

well penned... beautiful write...