Loving him ( Tyburn)

by Ingrid   Jan 7, 2009


Loving him ( Tyburn)

Longing
Craving
Yearning
Learning
To love him evoked longing, craving
Losing him left me yearning, learning

Tyburn - A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.
This poem was inspired by my friend Silvia: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1105148

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent job with this form. The fews words used conveyed many powerful emotions. Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    This is really a powerful message that you brought across. Though your heart longs for someone that who doesn't love you. It also educate you about your love's lesson.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I really loved this. So little words, so much meaning. It turned from being a nice love poem, to heartache all in a line, very clever. I really liked the form you used.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Learning is important ingrid
    it is the essence iof every person life

    and our internal growth
    love is a living felling that live adn die , but it si like war , easy to start , devistating in his life , impossible to forget

    have the strengh angel , angels are made for sacrifices ...

    hugs**

  • 15 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem i love the challenge of if.. You did a great job.. I love the end of it… it show the truth in how bad love can go wrong and how you learn from it. Amazing

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