Wow. Simple, sweet with a bit of sour...Kind of like sour patch kids. First its sweet, but then its sour...except its backwards...Well either way, great job writting this. I am going to have to try to write a Tyburn now...It looks fun! 5/5

Nice poem i love the challenge of if.. You did a great job.. I love the end of it… it show the truth in how bad love can go wrong and how you learn from it. Amazing

Learning is important ingrid
it is the essence iof every person life

and our internal growth
love is a living felling that live adn die , but it si like war , easy to start , devistating in his life , impossible to forget

have the strengh angel , angels are made for sacrifices ...

hugs**

I really loved this. So little words, so much meaning. It turned from being a nice love poem, to heartache all in a line, very clever. I really liked the form you used.
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This is really a powerful message that you brought across. Though your heart longs for someone that who doesn't love you. It also educate you about your love's lesson.

Excellent Job
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Excellent job with this form. The fews words used conveyed many powerful emotions. Good job. 5/5