Equine Friend [Tyburn]

by oddi tea   Jan 7, 2009


Racing
Bounding
Flying
Falling
On the track racing, bounding beauty
My equine jumps falling, flying free

Tyburn - A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This is really good, I havnt seen this style before =]
    Nice job

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow this was really cleverly written :]
    I have a horse and the way your poem was described, really has inspired me to get back into it a little more.
    Awesome poem!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ah, lovely! You did this with so much grace:)
    In the fifth line I think I counted 10 syllables, this could be fixed by simply removing the first word.
    Very good this Tyburn!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: I love horses too!

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