Love this real

by Amanda   Jan 8, 2009


I love the way i felt
you made my heart melt

i couldnt belive it was real
the sensation you made me feel

In my heart there was no pain
in my stomach all the joy contain

I smile at whatever you say
no ones ever made me feel this way

There is nothing i can do
but forever and always love you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I need to add to this poem , becasue i could not jsut read once , it jsut kept geting in my head, you did a very good job making it simple enough to stay in the reader mind,

    very good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well, i know now how wonderfull your style is ,

    simple , light short , close to the heart ... witch make anyone understand know and see the beauty if the rhyming

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