"But you can't be like something that isn't like itself."
`Wow, you really spoke the truth through your words right here.. flawless.

"I have freckles. All over
my white and tan face, and they get confused."
`Short vivid description, good job.

"They get all mucked up in the mess
and so very distracted in their own being."
`Oh wow. You made me stop for a second and admire this line. Mucked was uhmm perfect! I just loved it. I can so picture this, wooow.. vivid description!

"but only when I'm crazy.

I suppose I'm always crazy."
`I kinda am liking youre repetition here. Apperently its something you really want to emphasize...

"you liked my pretty."
`Awkward line.. did you mean to say beauty or something instead of pretty?

"Sometimes I talk to the moon and she sounds like you.."
`I loved this comparison.. it just blew me away.

Well done.
What a unique write.

5/5.