But now, the chance I have, my heart can see
It is time to unleash what I feel and be free
Maybe I will win or lose that is up to fate
I just hope in this, that I am not too late

^^^The second line of this stanza is my most favorite line. To unleash how you feel is so very liberating. To tell the other one how you feel is frightening and fear of rejection is always there.
I love this poem, Moucha..you have such a tender heart:)
I hope she will see this too and accept you into her heart:)
Much luck, my friend..I will keep them crossed for you!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Well well well playboy. :)
Very sweet. Who knew you were such a romantic?
I loved it. I was riveted the whole way through. The concept of forbidden love is very hard to capture, but I think you did it wonderfully. We should see about doing a collab. 5/5

What a sweet poem CJ. You really do have a softer side to you and it comes out in your poetry. I hope you showed this to the girl you wrote it about, because it was very sweet. Forbidden love is extremely hard im sure, so good luck with it, if its what you and her really want, then im sure it will work out. The flow was really good and so was the rhyme. Another excellent poem.
5/5

Very nicely written

Very nicely written