Suggestions:
Okay, to start off.. you need to somehow make this actually look like a poem. Maybe put the first stanza into a stanza, shorten it up so it looks nice. [Sorry, I'm picky!]
Secondly, make sure that you put spaces between your words and your commas, that becomes very irritating, in my opinion.
Third, maybe run a quick spell check, I stumbled across a mispelled word;

"And thank you,thank you for leting me feel that you need me."
`Leting should be letting

"Now you bacame someone that shines more than gold,"
`What a beautiful line youve come up with here. Well done.

"I'm standing here alone,so far from you (...)"
`I really dont get the significance behind the (...)?

What a sad write, I can really feel how this person is so far away and you cant reach them.. you feel so alone.. your emotions are simply written yet clear.

Interesting format, and structure. I would have liked a flow with this poem though, it's really dull and can seem boring at times without a flow. :/

Sorry but I have to give you a 4/5.
Good effort though, hope my suggestions help you.

I like this poem very much! It has a strong message.. and I specially love this line: "Some told our love won't last,but I believed,I believed in our love till the end " It really touched my heart!! 5/5

Its a gd poem nd it shows dat when u love some 1 u would do wat eva u can to stay with the person tro gd nd bad
its a 5/5