by SashaMirage Jan 8, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Lying in the hot desert, shaded by love |
A wonderful dream! 5/5 |
A beautiful piece, I like your word choice and you had some good images in there. A very enjoyable read, nice work. |
by Cara
This is such a beautiful poem. A really unique idea, writing about a mirage.. i dont think ive seen that one before so awesome work. I really liked the description you gave of the mirage.. if it werent for the title then i wouldnt have had any idea until the end that it wasnt real. I liked the title though, it really made me want to read it. |
by Faithless
Wow this is absolutely beautiful.I love how you use the desert's mirage as a metaphor, |