Money ( String Senryu)

by Ingrid   Jan 8, 2009


Money ( String Senryu)

Money can buy goods
It makes life comfortable
but does not fill hearts

Money builds houses
buys you cars, gold, worldly goods
It can 't buy you love

Money is needed
to make our lives easier
No God to bow at

Written for a poetic image contest, using this picture:
http://www.lifemagick.net/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/moneyrain.jpg

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You are right on with this. Money cannot buy everything in life and this is something some people have yet to understand. Happiness and love come from within and all the money in the world cannot but them. Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Though money can buy you lots of things...but not everything can be bought with money.Love and friendships are those which money can't buy...though who only have friend because they have money still yet to realize who their true friends are.
    Love is the one thing that everyone need but yet can't be bought.I love how u convey ur message with so little words.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    So true. Money cannot buy the things we need the most. We always try to cover up that and compensate by buying fancy cars or expensive things that we dont need, so that we dont need love and friendship. Well that doesnt work too well.. because everyone needs things that money cant buy.
    It was really well done, the flow was really good.
    Good luck in the contest, i know you will do great.
    5/5

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