I like this poems very much.. It speaks exactly about what happened during the Holocaust!.. Nicely written.. And this poems proves that you don't always have to rhyme every line for a poem to sound good! 5/5

For something that was transalated, this is very good.

Poems dont have to have set rhythm or layout, they can be whatever you want, thats the beauty of it.

You've done a great job with it!

5/5
Gem

I loved it, not what it was about of course, but i loved the poem

I think Its a nice attempt and correct translation. It could convey the meaning orrectly.

Nicely put. Powerful and true, 5/5. You don't have to worry about peoples comments. If it's good, it's wonderful. If it's bad, it's experiance :)

From the title , I knew it, the poem was gonna be about the jews. But nonetheless you have describe this poem well.Keep it up