by Genny Jan 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Gasping for air |
by Let It Be
Wow i love the ending |
I'm spechless!!! this dream everyone seems to get it but i never thought someone would do a poem of it... the pain i feel in this poem is beautiful!! i just love it!!! :) 5/5 |
Great write my friend! I loved it. Keep penning. |
Wow...this is a heart throbbing piece. I couldn't imagine having to relieve the pain of absence everyday of my life. I love how this poem was penned with so much emotions yet with simple words. |
Excellent poem. Great flow, was really expressive, such raw heart ache in every line, very well written. :) |