Jeez, this was fantastic, i loved it. And this is the exact kind of poem i needed to read, to konw that even if you dont go through this, that you at least thought of it. Its great 5/5

Excellent poem. Great flow, was really expressive, such raw heart ache in every line, very well written. :)

Wow...this is a heart throbbing piece. I couldn't imagine having to relieve the pain of absence everyday of my life. I love how this poem was penned with so much emotions yet with simple words.

Great poem

Great write my friend! I loved it. Keep penning.

I'm spechless!!! this dream everyone seems to get it but i never thought someone would do a poem of it... the pain i feel in this poem is beautiful!! i just love it!!! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

Wow i love the ending