by No one
Wow.. Wes, that was amazing! I totally love it, sad subject and I'm sorry that everyone of the female gender is a b.itch (no offence to anyone). |
by Jad
I agree that this was the best poem that I've read by you. The flow was good throughout the poem and the rhyming was good as well. The imagery in the poem was good too in this poem. The feeling of which you spoke in this poem all know too well. I no it may seem that someone seems right for you but then they leave. Someday though you will find the right person for you and they will be everything to you and you will be everything to them. So this was a good poem and I hope that you keep writing and good job and I will give you a 5/5. |