by kylexthexmagnificent Jan 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Darkness has fallen around me, |
by Hollymariee
Emotional , and well written . When you do rhyming poems you should try and create a rhyme pattern . |
by Hollywood
Really liked this |
Another good one, mista kyle. |
Very dark, and emotional piece, I could feel what you were feeling, and that's something a lot of poetry on here cannot make me do, is feel. Great job. 5/5 |
by Faithless
Nice. i like the poem from the strat to the finish. Well sometimes we do fall back to our past makes us weak and confused. |