This is the last poem for you.
by Mask of Pain Jan 9, 2009
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This is my last thought of you. I'm sick of you and your dumb jokes. I try to be there for you but you never act like a friend. What is sad is that your own friend thinks the same. I'm sick and tried of thought of you making my life so so tiring and fueled with hate. This is the last time I will ever say you name. I have a life and I'm going to live it and you are not going to be in it. I'm tried and I just want to sleep. But you keep me up at night. I don't like to feel sad because of you. This is the last poem for you. |
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15 years ago
by Nobodys Hero
This is a very nice poem, however I feel if you were to give it a more poetic structure it could make even better.
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15 years ago
"This is the last thought of you."
Maybe try instead..
"This is my last thought of you."
It makes it more personal and adds emotion. :]
"I'm sick of you and your dum jokes."
"I'm sick of you and your dumb jokes."
"I'm sick and tried of thought of you making my life so so tiring and fulled with hate."
"I'm sick and tired of you, you make my life so tiring and fueled with hate."
"This is the last time i will ever say you name."
"This is the last time I will ever say your name."
That should help with the spelling ^.^
