by BlackIris
Good work.. |
by Christopher Hantman
I'm stupid, completely and utterly |
This is the kind of poem anyone who has ever felt the pain of rejection, real or imagined would love to have written to them. As far as I am concerned it is as good as any I have written, or read |
I thought your emotions were clear, but it was such a short poem I almost wanted it to continue longer so that the reader could have seen more emotions expressed and expressed in depthly. I would keep expanding on this poem because I think there's more you can say to such a small poem such as this. |
by Teria
I'm stupid, completely and utterly |
by Jenni Marie
"I'm stupid, completely and utterly |