I love it ..
Dont crack on me .. Please.

xxx

Nice emtions you really told a storyy
it had a nice flow to it as well, kepp it up
good job.

Aveena.

Yes, I must say this is one of my favourite ones aswell.
My figgen god though this was amazing.
It was so powerful from start to finish, every stanza was worded perfectly to build up the finished story beautifully.
- I liked them so much but I think this was my favourite.
"The truth behind her sad eyes,
She will never tell
Outside- she looks happy,
Inside- she hurts like hell"
I'm back so if you are lets chat :)
5/5, Nice work

Great poem, Very well written, Lots of emotion

This is really really sad
but i relate
hiding the person you really
are, and the pain insidee.

excellent poem.
x

First off, thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. :)
As for this one, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It conveys strong emotions that I can easily relate to. Hiding your true feelings from others is not easy to do. I'm sorry you're having to feel this pain, but you did a great job of letting it out in this poem. Great writing, Great read, and Great Job!
5/5 Hopeless Romantic

"She will smile to your face,
Cry behind your back
Fear is what she carries,
And love, what she lacks

The truth behind her sad eyes,
She will never tell
Outside- she looks happy,
Inside- she hurts like hell"

I love that part, it shows the contrast of what people see, and what is the truth.

That's why it makes it hard for so many people to realise that something is up. From personal experience, a smile covers everything.

I love this poem and will favourite it. Keep writing =)

Stay Strong x

5/5

Such a powerful, emotional piece. Like I said before I'm sorry you feel like this, stay strong. 5/5. Em x

Very well written and expressed. Loved it... You have my sincere best wishes :) And keep writing! And stay strong... Lol. A very deep write, that I could relate to. Well done.

Olwin.

This is such a... im at a loss for words. i love this poem and it touched me. great job and keep up the good work.