I Know My ABC's

Attitudes
belittled.
Cowards
Dwell
emotionally.

^^I really liked the opening, it is so true and speaks so loud, it definetely drew me in to read further.

Nobley
objective
people
question
righteousness,
starving
tastes
undeniably
vast.

^^This was my favorite stanza. I think you did a great job for this contest and I really enjoyed your entry, a deserved win.

This was one of the most creative poems ive read in a long time.. you managed to even use the tricky letters of the alphabet :]
i admire your originality a great deal. This piece was very unique.
5/5

"Attitudes
belittled.
Cowards
Dwell
emotionally"

^^ Absolutely frikken LOVE these lines, I'm not even sure what to say here, as these lines just blew me away..so much power behind the words..

"Forgotten
ginger
hums
in
junction,
killing
love
miraculously."

^^ I like this, but I find it to be a little weaker than the opening stanza, which was a little disappointing, however having said that the imagery in this stanza makes up for that, it creates such vivid pictures in my mind.

"Nobley
objective
people
question
righteousness,
starving
tastes
undeniably
vast."

^^ Ahhh this is more like it...once again strong, full of power and feeling, and this is bringing up so many conflicting emotions for me as the reader.

"Wilting
xylem
yeilds
zealots."

^^ Well I admit I had to look up two of those words =D

But I love this ending, I find this closing stanza to be more powerful than the rest of the piece put together.

I really liked the style you used here, original and I imagine it would have been somewhat difficult to pull of but here you make it look effortless.

K L M , the best letters in your alphabet. in my perspective the second stanza is the only one i sort of understood, you see i dont know if you were just giving words to the letters or if it was part of a bigger picture. either way the words that you chose are great, i think they have hidden meanings lol

HS