Hey..
What a wonderful write..very well done on this, I totally love your wording and the rhyming was great :]

When you give your heart to someone
You give them the power to tear you apart
You thought they were worth your trust
You should have seen it from the start

Then you fit yourself for the battle
This life thats so much like a war
Hatred spreads from your brain
All the way down to your core

Those stanzas were my fave..very heartfelt especially the second one.
I love this piece !
Write on