A very different and unique piece I thought this was. At first you explain this hospital where no patient is in pain and everyone is happy and content. Wish that was real huh? But then one man stands out, but they can't find anything wrong with him, but he's so down. Good wording and descriptions, this poem was so alive and real to me. Excellent ending too, making the reader wonder what happens next. Nice job, I am really glad I came across this write. 5/5 from me, take care!