Forever ( Dodoitsu)

by Ingrid   Jan 10, 2009


When life has robbed you of all,
your world turned to dark despair
Let all your thoughts turn inwards,
strength and love lie there

Dodoitsu:
syllable count
7-7-7-5
consisting of humor or love

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    So true Ingrid, so true your poem.
    Inside, we all have an inner strength, and should use it in times of trouble and strife.
    Well written, with its inspirational message to all of us.
    When all seems lost around you, then turn to yourself for your salvation.
    A good write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a beautiful message of hope and courage and written in a very unique form of poetry. Good job. I am glad I stumbled across this as it is very uplifting to read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I am constantly amazed at how so few words can be used to convey such powerful messages. You have done well with this and the message is so true. Good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    With so little you still manage to display the strength.Though your heart has been broken it is also the one that you turn to for your next direction.This poem really inspire me and i'm sure it will inspire others walking in the same shoes as you;)

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I agree with Porcy, the message in this poem was truly inspiring and uplifting. I took it as, if you looked to your heart, love and hope will be there to guide you through all the bad times.
    This was a really inspiring poem.. thankyou for writing it and sharing it.
    5/5