P.s Love You

by LoneStar   Jan 10, 2009


I know that you can't see
how much patience i've used
just to wait for your love
everyday standing in the rain
in front of your door waiting in vain

when will you finally realize
that im just by your side
when will the time that
your eyes will look at me
and your heart will love me

you know i can't take more
of this pain your giving me
but everytime i see your lips smile
you know that i can't resist it

hear my heart screaming your name
look at my eyes and you'll see what i mean
you know that i love you and i will always do

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  • 15 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    I really like this poem. :) Good job, i especially like the line: "hear my heart screaming your name" I have felt this and it's hard, well, good job. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    I really like this poem. :) Good job, i especially like the line: "hear my heart screaming your name" I have felt this and it's hard, well, good job. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    I like this poem =) But I feel like it's lacking some things. It is not rhyming all the way through which is fine, it does not need to do. But what I think would make it better is if you compared things. Ex. as dark as the night etc. Ok that was a stupid example but i hope you get my point :) But good work!

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