I like this poem =) But I feel like it's lacking some things. It is not rhyming all the way through which is fine, it does not need to do. But what I think would make it better is if you compared things. Ex. as dark as the night etc. Ok that was a stupid example but i hope you get my point :) But good work!

I really like this poem. :) Good job, i especially like the line: "hear my heart screaming your name" I have felt this and it's hard, well, good job. :)

I really like this poem. :) Good job, i especially like the line: "hear my heart screaming your name" I have felt this and it's hard, well, good job. :)