Drove You Home

by No Need For A Name   Jan 11, 2009


It's been a tough night lying in bed
With thoughts of you running through my head
Did you think of me today
Or is that just me of you

Well can't we move passed last year
Into the future to find a cure
For a mended heart with torn stitches
And a mind that won't forget

Well I don't know what I've been told
But this tension here is getting old
I wish you'd answer the damn phone
The problem started when I drove you home

You know I always drive be your home
Every time I actually come to town
Are you asleep, silently dream
Or do you lie awake

I try and look deep in your eyes
Try to decipher what your lips deny
That those words and those moments
Were the chances that you'll take

Well I don't know what I've been told
But this tension here is getting old
I wish you'd answer the damn phone
The problem started when I drove you home
And I wish that you would look at me
Utter some words finally speak
Well this is not an answer this is not a plea
But when I drive you home you make me weak

I'm desperate to relive and retrace
I'm waiting for you to let me back to that place
I'm trying hard to catch your disease
To let me back into your heart I'm wishing please

Well I don't know what I've been told
But this tension here is getting old
I wish you'd answer the damn phone
The problem started when I drove you home
And I wish that you would look at me
Utter some words finally speak
Well this is not an answer this is not a plea
But when I drive you home you make me weak

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  • 16 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Oh man this makes me sad cuz i been there and its ugly!
    but any who! i love it! i always like a poem i can relate to cuz it brings out feelings and i bet for many others too!
    very well written, i like the flow of it, i like the amount of rhyming. i always feel like i HAVE to ALWAYS rhyme, and i want to break out of that, and i think trying to write a poem like this, with SOME rhyming would be good for me to try! thanks for the idea!

  • 16 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hey! dats nicely written.. no doubt! i liked it....

    Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "Or is that just me of you"
    - I don't like this line. Even in a song I can't see it being sung. It's kind of confusing. I might be wrong, it's hard to tell without hearing it sung but at the same time I can kind of hear it in my head, and it just seems off to me.

    "You know I always drive be your home"
    be = by

    "Well I don't know what I've been told
    But this tension here is getting old
    I wish you'd answer the damn phone
    The problem started when I drove you home"
    - Love the first three lines. The last line is okay, it works I guess. Not sure if it works every time but the first time said it does.

    Well done. (: I really enjoyed this piece. I could almost hear it in my head, but at the same time there were a few spots that were iffy. I'm sure it's just because I don't know how you're putting it together. But as I've said before, if you know what you're doing I'm sure it's put together just fine.

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