Comments : I Dont Know Who I Am

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Its not strange or stupid at all to not know who you are. Most of us spend our whole lives searching and never truly find out. Never feel like you are silly for being a little lost.. because everybody feels like the dont belong.. like they dont fit in at some time in their lives.
    It was a really good write, i really enjoyed it. Im sure a lot of people can truly relate to this poem, so awesome work.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Great poem, excellent question, at one point or another we all ask the same question, you wrote this poem very very well with an addictive ryme and choice of words.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Lovvvved the ending, the tittle caught my eye because I have a similer poem, I thought -like mine- it was going to be about the part in your life where you don't know who you are. I was surprised to see that it was about the numbness we feel sometime in our life where it's like we are there, but not at the same time.
    Good job, this is how we're supposed to do it, find an attracting tittle and surprise everyone with the inside...

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    I feel like im someone else,
    I dont ever feel like i belong,
    Im confused and all over the place,
    Why does everything feel so wrong!?

    that was my fav stanza!
    i felt like this but eventually found who i was when i met my bf :)....
    well written
    xo 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CareBear

    So So So, Very good :)

  • 15 years ago

    by 777

    I love it! its been a while sens i read a good poem!! plus i no that feels.

    <3
    JAsman