Aww this was really sweet and cute good job |
by Ingrid
This is simply beautiful, Cara. |
by oddi tea
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by Faithless
You have managed to capture the essence of the your title really well.With so little words you have describe it perfectly. I like how you describe rain as silver droplet.Excellent Job |
by SashaMirage
Wow the imagery was beautiful! I loved the title it really brought a smile to my face because I have never thought of rain this way. 5/5 |
by Lonely Rider
Beautiful haiku... I specially loved the title here ... describing sunshine as liquid... |
A absoluetly mind-blowing haiku, the imagery portrayed is extraordinary and really gives me clear images and pictures. Great job, you created such a beautiful masterpiece that was a joy to read. 5/5 from me, take care... |
by PoetryKnight
Oh, your talking about the sun, lol, sorry my mind went the other way on this one. lol. stupid amarican (to myself). lol 5/5 |