If You Will Be MY Eyes.

I love this poem. its great keep up the good work :)

This poem left me in awe. you are definately my favorite author. i cant wait to read more by you. You give me tons of inspiration!! I wish my poems were to be as good as yours! keep it up!!!! 5/5

If you will be my love, I will just be me

No greater thing, I can offer you to be

that to me just said it all
amazin one again :)

Aww CJ, this is such a sweet and caring poem. It really shows what you are willing to do for the person you love. I agree with Ingrid, giving yourself, as you are, is a huge thing.. it means you arent hiding behind anything and you arent pretending anything. This was such a simple poem, but it really hit me hard. You are a great poet.
I hope you showed this to the girl you wrote it for.
5/5

AAWWW, so cute!! I love it! So sweet, so simple, so AMAZING! Definately worth reading (even if it only takes a little time to read) and DEFINATELY a keeper. Great Job!!! 5/5