Dear Cara,

I share your passion for music and dancing.
I could not think of an activity more healing than allowing your body to move to the music. Music goes rigth to our soul and heals it and so does moving your body in a rhythmic way.

Beautifully written as well, you go girl;)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow. Dancing, it really is suck a great topic to write about, I guess I am kinda suprised that there arent more poems about it. This is a great poem, I cant dance and your poem makes me want to go out and turn the music up loud and dance my crazy heart out. It makes me want to get up and get out. Go clubbing, go to ballet, something. It was wonderfully written. Congrats on making my favorites list!! 5/5

I liked it. You had good wording, and the piece was well structured. However, I don't know what it is, but something just didn't seem right (a crap critical piece of feedback, I know, lol). Perhaps it was the theme of it. Anyway, good work. Maybe I'll see another one of your pieces.

Brad

Wow i can totally feel the vibe and the passion that you have for dancing. You have portrayed here as it is a part of your life. Your love for dancing has really step up your poetry writing skills.

The echo makes my blood pump and my heart pulse

^^^This just show that even your blooding is dancing through your veins

I think you have done a excellent job in expressing your love for dance.Keep it up;)

5/5

Music , the very essensial of the human touching feeling , the secret that make our sprirt grow and the sound that heal most of our pain and sufffering , and give us joy and satisfaction..

it seem cara you found this truth somewhere between the dancing floor , where th body and the sound work as one , to relve his pain ,.
i would remvoe the semi colon and use a simple colon , but other then that the expression and the flow were jsut amaizing . i think you expressed a topic that a little know how to express ,

great job

Woah. This was written greatky. It show how much you love dancing and the words were just put together reallly well. Really Great Work

Thank you,

for not sucking. You took something as simple as dancing and created a beautiful thought process. You made me like reading about dancing. The poem was "put together". Nothing was forced, and your flow almost mimicked that of dancing.

Aw Cara this made me feel really good ^^
very captivating title indeed.
loved your wording and everything =)
I only have one comment:
"My body becomes captive, it controls my mind, my feet"
I think this could've been better if you made it like this:
My body becomes captive, it controls my mind [and] feet"
I mean "and" instead of "my".

But still nothing lessened the beauty of this piece :]
very well done..I truly admire poems about music and rhythm of the heart
Write on

I could see this as a song, lol. good one, written only by you. 5/5