To The Girl Who Will Replace Me

by Sweet Disposition   Jan 11, 2009


To the girl who will replace me
I think it's best I tell you straight
You ought to know a few sharp facts
About the boy you're soon to date

Although charming he may seem
You'll learn his love is just a fix
Lies will linger on his tongue
And you'll play victim to his tricks

You'll be familiar with his frown
The one he'll pull when he's been caught
And when you quiz him on his ways
He'll have done 'nothing of the sort'

You'll have bruises on your hips
From where he'll hold you oh so tight
But you won't get that explanation
To where he was the previous night

His friends will swear that it's a miracle
You putting him on track
Secretly knowing what he's up to,
Laughing there behind your back

He'll call you his rare diamond
Claiming he is but a stone
Then he'll crush you in an instant
Causing aches deep in the bone

But if there's one thing you'll observe
From the boy who has it all
It's that ever-living beauty
Between the rise and fall

The loyalty between you,
It won't break just like your heart
And he'll genuinely miss you
Whenever you're apart

Though he acts so unaffected
When you scream that you are through
If you gaze into those pupils
You will see he's hurting too

And when he's acting like a robot
With no feeling of remorse
You'll have tampered with his heart strings
With such a heavy force

So please love him while you can
And just don't be another me,
Don't you fail at trying to change him!
Be the girl who made him see.

January '09

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  • 14 years ago

    by JaM

    My goodness! That was absolutely fantastic!! I truly enjoyed reading that. I like the flow of the poem most. I find that with longer poems-most writers tend to break at a point and "make it work" but that just worked all on it's own. Very well done, loved the context.

    Hope to see more great writes!
    Jam

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    WOW, this is definitely one of my favorite poems. this is absolutely amazing! the flow was perfect, along with the rhymes. this is one of the best poems I've ever read. I love this poem, it has a very unique story to it. i've only heard a few of these poems. This one is definitely the best.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Very Very good.. Be glad your away from him.. And trust me, you will find someone that will make you very happy someday.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    That was a very good poem. I liked it a lot, and I very rarely like love poems. I like the angle of which you approached it. I thought the piece was very well structured, and your rhymes and words were great. A piece I genuinely liked.

    Brad