That was a very good poem. I liked it a lot, and I very rarely like love poems. I like the angle of which you approached it. I thought the piece was very well structured, and your rhymes and words were great. A piece I genuinely liked.

Brad

Very Very good.. Be glad your away from him.. And trust me, you will find someone that will make you very happy someday.

WOW, this is definitely one of my favorite poems. this is absolutely amazing! the flow was perfect, along with the rhymes. this is one of the best poems I've ever read. I love this poem, it has a very unique story to it. i've only heard a few of these poems. This one is definitely the best.

My goodness! That was absolutely fantastic!! I truly enjoyed reading that. I like the flow of the poem most. I find that with longer poems-most writers tend to break at a point and "make it work" but that just worked all on it's own. Very well done, loved the context.

Hope to see more great writes!
Jam