*Claps*

Yay Jen! Another masterpiece in this series. You got me hooked girl! Haha. I loved learning more about him in this poem because in the other two he was still a bit of a mystery. You still kept that trait in this one but it was more honest and real. Loved the flow and the rhyme was perfect.

"He kept quiet, but not for long, it he couldn't fight."
^I dont like the words "it" here. It seems out of place and had me wondering what "it" was.

All in all a great job!
*5/5* :]