by Teria
"for thee is cold and depressed" |
by Spirit
You are correct you did try something different. It works tough, I love the Symbolism and deeper meaning in your poem. Also this poem just capured me in a way, to were I wasn't worried about the (eth) or (ine) or even word use and flow. |
Very nice write, I enjoyed the read. I know how hard it is to write like this since I've written 1 or 2 poems in this style. I commend you for trying something new, as I said before it was a nice write. Great for your first try, but I'm sure it can be improved upon with practice, however; I really don't have the knowledge in this area of poetry as much as I'd like to, to give you sound advice but I'll try my best. |
Thine heart hast become of diamonds |
Thine heart hast become of diamonds |
"Thine heart hast become of diamonds |
"Thine heart hast become of diamonds |
The first stanza was amazing and flawless, the Old English was simply fantastic. I always love reading poetry as such. |
by Cindy
Congrats on your win Sherry :) |
Congratulations on the win! Very much deserved, take care.... |
by Nobodys Hero
First of all this is the first time I have read a poem on here written in old english, I know that it's a challenging thing to do but I think you wrote this piece very well =] |
by debbylyn
Congrats on the win! |
I love old english and you brought it to present time beautifully. I wish more would write this way, keep it up! |
by Gizmo
Honestly i don't like the old style lanuage i think it gets overrated because some of the best poets wrote like that..but how can we produce great poetry now, when we are coping the older ones. sorry if it sounds harsh it's just how i feel. |
Good work you know how to do a good job keep it up |
by Ingrid
Release thy guilt from thine own soul |
by Sunshine
Ah..you got comments longer than the poem it self ..so Let me be short, I never came across your latest poems, cause I chose certain categories b4 ...but I regret not reading this. |
by Decayed
Great one :D |
by rachael
"Thine heart hast become of diamonds |
by Joseph Boadi
The use of demotic english makes this piece clasic and authentic.its a perfect piece |