Glad I came across this poem! I love when people input old English into their poems!

What a soulful poem sherry... firstly belated congratulations on your win.. And secondly, I loved your old-english attempt.. To learn new things is one thing and getting praised for the same is other...I loved the message you give in here and it depicts a wise note of life...

Thine heart hast become of diamonds
no more a soul alloweth to break through
thee blood that bleedeth from thy wound-- black
for thou grieve; continued to corrupt-doomed

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A wonderful start and having compared the heart to a diamond is brilliant and depicts how a heart which has turned so hard is always reluctant to accept the truth and criticism.

Shalt thou be forever prisoned
within thine own walls of misery
can ye not findeth a way
to somehow set thee free

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Yes, its always so wrong to capture and prison your views, understanding and not giving it an air of freedom... Good visual put up here..

Release thy guilt from thine own soul
comfort and peace wilt then be bestowed
binding thy evils from haunting thine every move
toils no more; thy feet and shackles now becometh twain

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Life is all about give and take and not a one-sided business...

Thine heart shalt then be as clay
alloweth to bend and mold-blessed plight endeared
thine own blood shalt then bleedeth red
boasting thy passion and love whence forth

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persevering to become a good human and accepting life to be the way it is makes things easy and everything worthwhile...

Keep writing hun please... I need your dose of inspiration always....
Good work:)