Comments : Secret Admirer

  • I found the poem good, and it flowed well.

    "So without your knowledge I will secretly fight,
    With all my courage, cunning, and might.
    That one day you and I will be together,
    Through rain, through storm, through the darkest of weather.

    Though, of my true identity you may be an inquirer,
    I will remain till the time comes, Your secret admirer."

    ^^^ That is the best part of the poem in my opinion, and love the ending =)

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by damaged rose

    Thank you so much! i really appreciate it.

  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    That is so sweet. :)