It's amazing...Girl YOU are an amazing young poetess..
your poetry really deserves more than you're given on the site..alas some people are given more than they deserve..

Anyway..such powerful lines..I loved the beginning of the poem and how you related it so much to the end..that was really great !

"Show me the light you hide underneath your bed,
It's so much warmer there, away from your head."

Amazing lines..gotta say you keep impressing me each moment I run deeper in the poem.
I loved your wording..it was professional, not just some words to rhyme..everything flowed really well..I can't find any flaws =)

I'm starting to really like your poetry.
Write on and keep on hitting me :]
xx