Where you to blind to see

by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion   Jan 12, 2009


Your name is burnt into my head
Feelings will fade if only I'm dead

There is something in your eyes
That scares me into your lies

You walked out of my heart
And left me torn apart

You didn't seem to care
That your deception was unfair

You never held me at night
When nothing was alright

You couldn't even answer a call
To save me losing it all

Was it so very hard to say
That everything would be OK

Where you to blind to see
Your "Love" was killing me?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    A nice short poem. Again, I thought it was missing that WOW factor. All of the words were pretty plain and bland, but it still expressed your thought effectivly. In the very last stanza, WHERE YOU TO BLIND TO SEE; TO should be TOO.

    Not really much else to say, sorry for a short comment. I liked the poem, but I though you were expressing a very mature emotion using very common words.

    Not my favorite poem; sorry to be honest.

    Keep on writing though!

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