Come With Me

by Monica93   Jan 12, 2009


I need you to come with me
On a runaway train to another galaxy
Don't you understand that there we will always be free?

Please don't say that you cannot leave
That you have a tangled web that you have to reweave
I just really need you to come with me and to believe

I can't explain everything right now
That's more than my heart can allow
But right now we must get away somehow

I know you don't understand
But please just follow me off into dreamland
Just come and grasp my desperate hand

I'm crying for you to come stand by me
Quick, my eyes are becoming blotchy
Please just come with me into a world of carefree

I need you to come with me
On a runaway train to another galaxy
Don't you understand that there we will always be free?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Grandpoet

    Good use of simplicity.i can honestly say tht ths is th first poem on ths site tht th poet attemptd at drawin emotions 4rm th reader nd somewhat succeeded...nd ths waz achievd by jas a combination of simple thoughts instead of boombastic ideas tht rily express nothin.back 2 th poem howeva,th poem z not at ol perfct nd tht is becoz o th 2nd stanza,it jas didnt fit in,it kinda feels lost admist ol th otha beautifl stanza.am nt sayin its not sposd 2 b thea,bt tht u shud re-write it wth more sincerity nd emotive flow.4/5

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