Don't worry hun, I am here for you, things will be alright

^^^This line was most funy of all!
This poem cracked me up, Cara! You have to read it together with Porcy's to really enjoy it to the fullest, ha ha ha!
Omg, you two are great together!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Aww haha this is cute and funny. i like love the rhyming. wonderful work 5/5

Nice flow

Hahah... this is so funny tt you wrote a poem reply to porcy of how deprive she is..to not taste tim tams and vegemites lol.I really think this poem is cute;) Excellent Job

5/5

Hahaha lol yous are funny. And yes, she most certainatly has not lived until shehas tasted vegemite and tim tams. Theres too good to live without. =] excellent work. Still smiling from that. lol 5/5

Haha! This is great! Really enjoyed reading this, excellent! :]

Not funny,but beautiful execution.I love this poem!
U employd the use of rhymes beautifuly,plus the simplicity reminded me of Ogden Nash.Bravo!

Australian veggimite is not good whatsoever. lol. but that is what made me laugh.

Urge to scream Aussie and oi rising...