WOW! This is such a vivid and expressive poem. Very clear in it's form that there remains so much yet to say but even in the screams of pity we reign amidst what we cannot see.
I truly loved the repetition and the whole feel of the poem was so intense.
Amazing work! Keep it up!

Well i can feel so much anger within you in this poem. Well I'm not to sure what made your relationship explode that causes so much enmity towards each other but i hope you guys part peacefully. The use of the word scream kindda cause an echo in my ears when i read this. Well it was a great write. Keep it up

5/5