Fantasy

Gal you ROCK! you can write you are such a natural in this!!!!!

Beautifully written, the longing was almost touchable in this verse:)

I always love a poem that really tells a story and this one does, a story of true and deep desired love.

Great work, Sasha:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, what a delight to read. Its sad when you only have that in your dreams.. but you wrote it so well. The flow was great and it really kept me hooked. I read it again and again, because i loved it so much.
A fantastic write.

bodies come together as two candles
pulling me into a long awaited kiss
flames unite melting together as one
flying above reaching heavenly bliss

^^ Wow. This was genius. So clever. Really, this was truly amazing.

Awesome poem.
5/5

Wow seriously you have taken your poems to a whole new level. Having your feelings emotion metaphors all compacted into one. Indeed this is your best work.There is no denying that you're very talented. Your poem just speaks for yourself. Every words and every lines has a a great depth of meaning to it and you made it come to live

bodies come together as two candles
pulling me into a long awaited kiss
flames unite melting together as one
flying above reaching heavenly bliss

^^^ I love the way u use the candle as the metaphor and melting it into one it's juz beautiful

Overall this poem was really a delightful to read and you have done a spectacular job;)