"Maneuvering
Nationalists
Out-shined
Parasitically"

beautifully penned...

I saw this contest, and you have definatly penned a very great piece here. I loved how every single word you used was perfect, and they just fit together like puzzle pieces, to fit the title perfectly. Great title.. every word just came back to the title and it all made sense. Wonderful word choice..

Flawlessly written.
Interesting way to write a poem using the ABC`s.

5/5.

Iv'e seen this contest aswell and to be honest this piece is one of the best, your chioce of wording outshines most of the others =] Great job

Whoa this is very nice. I didnt notice it was like the alphabet til i showed my friend and she said something

Hmm, I've not yet seen this form of poetry, so I'm a little surprised! I loved all the words you used. I'm doing a poster on sexism in politics tomorrow, not that your poetry could fully relate, but bureaucrat in your title reminded me of that. :)

Bri~

You are just amazing with structured poems!! i couldn't do that with out making the words i used suck!! i like the words you choose : ) they were powerful
simple poem but great meaning to it 5/5 : ) : ) : )

I love the use of one word. That's so much powerful than using sentences. This way every word has it's own meaning. Very clever idea. I enjoyed this one. Keep it up. Nik