OH woow. This made me cry Maddy! This was just... amazing. Perfectly said. Youve left me speechless. Tj's mother will always be missed, but she'll always be here with us.

I'm just in awe.
5/5.

Wow what abeautifull poem, i know for sure that TJ loved it, and it was a super sweet thing to do for him, and you did it so well
Thank you so much

Grant aka as TJ's DAD

This was an excellent poem and shows what a true friend you are for TJ. Great insight in your words. Thank you for writing this for him.

Is hould really know better than to read two sad poems in a row. Yours and TJ's both made me cry. This poem was...beautiful. We all need to believe that the departed ones are now guardian angels, watching over us. This stanza was my favorite:
"Past few days he's awakened,
Goes to find his mother, then turns around, mistaken.
Mentally, his mind shut down.
In an effort to relieve the hurt that surrounds."
You forget, sometimes, when you go to sleep. And then you wake up the next morning and remember, and the pain starts anew. It was a wonderful poem. 5/5 doesn't do it justice.

Maddy,

This is a truly beautiful poem you have penned for TJ. It must have been hard for you to write it, because you love him so much and it must be unbearable to know how much he is suffering right now.
You have a good heart, it shines through your words:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, wonderful poem

This was amazing poem, your wording was perfect.
You made me think, that when a person
pastes away, that its not the end of the world.
That they'll always be by your side
Even when you start feeling alone.
Which is great..cause my aunt pasted and
My mom, my sisters and I were
very close to her!
And I miss her dearly!
This poem helps me understand
She'll always be there!
5/5