by Cotton Candy Clouds Jan 13, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Don't you dare tell me there was never any chemistry! |
This was amazing!! the best!!! i loved the words you used and i could picture it all. and how you felt came out clearly. keep it up cause you're really good at writing!! please comment on any of mine to see what you think. thanks :) |
Well i'm not going to drag out a long comment bc "awesome poem" says it all. very powerful and full of emotion. i like it alot. =] |
An excellent write from an good poet. I loved your choice of words. You used a very wide selection of vocabulary, which is always nice to see. The structure just okay for me, it's like I'm reading paragraphs. |
by El
Amazing. just simply amazing |
Great poem, the pace was good and it went smoothly plus I just like poems like this where they practically shout out at the reader and grips their hearts. |