Hearts pain

by Sugadoo   Jan 13, 2009


Right now my heart is in so much pain
Can't really explain
what that pain is
Broken hearted wanting to cry
No water fills theses dry eyes.
Waterless
Here I sit wondering if I'm heartless
Its just another sad love song racking my brain like crazy.
Crazy!?
More like insane. Oh in do time
This shit will unwind
Into something deeper then me, my self, and I
Dearly departed my body from my soul
This that I feel is something so cold
Warmth
Yes my hearts needs it
Yet it is u that completes it
I call your name can you u hear me shout it
Will u come running
I highly doubt it
Thoughts of one like no other
A thought so deep its hidden under the covers
One can now discover
That Im not heartless
My eyes no longer waterless
You are the cause of my pain
Now I can explain
To my heart wit no lies
All you can do is apologize
Damn!
What a shame
I went through all this BS
To only realize that you where the cause of my hearts pain

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  • 15 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Wow, what a lovely slice of chaos you've cast into the world. I live on another continent and I'm left feeling a little guilty, shuffling my feet, wondering if it's somehow all my fault. The poem starts off a little stilted but then its natural flow cuts in and your talent shines through. I think if you cut out the first part, and start the poem instead at- Oh in due time... it will make it a much stronger piece of work. The first nine and a half lines are okay, but without them, the poem hits the ground running and doesn't slow down until you're done. Sorry for waffling on. Mostly brilliant.
    Let the Force hang loose
    Matt

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