Wow... Breathtaking.

I have the part one in the favorites, and I re-read it several times since you posted it, and this is a powerful continuation of it indeed. I really cannot express how much I like every line of this piece. It's flawless, utterly brilliant and filled with superb images.
I like your choice of words throughout the poem. Your ability to paint such vivid pictures within every stanza always amazes me.
This is definitely my new favorite from you.
I can't highlight one favorite part/stanza because every one of them is simply astonishing. Your love poems are deep and creative at the same time, and this one is not an exception. I love it.

Keep up :)