Awww...so sad girly ! You know there is more to life than looks even those stunning girls you see will end up older. Their looks will fade and the guy that married them for how "hott" they were will be left with the soul and heart of the person the immature guys go for looks a wise guy goes for a fun surprising girl who's personality they adore : ) 5/5

You make me sad, screw everyone of them, im sure you are beautiful, and alot of your poems are very feely thats awsome. i have a few poems that are simular have a read if you like

Phenomenally written, amazing flow. You paint amazing clear imagery in the readers mind, the emotions are very clear. Great job really exposing emotions like this. You are very talented :)

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Jacklynn,

This poem is written well, but the content is all wrong.
I took a good look at your picture and I see a pretty girl there! You have beautiful features, sweetheart!
If you are not happy with your weight then join a local gym. There you will find girls like you that are insecure too and they will become your fist friends. Go to a hairdresser that gives you a cut suited for your pretty little face. Go jogging, it will do wonders for both your skin, color of your cheeks and your mood!
Why do I tell you all this? I used to be just as insecure as you and I did all the things I mentioned above;)
Go for it girl, you have nothing to lose and everything to gain:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Oh, that was so sad and full of emotion. The rhyming and flow was perfect, you expressed how you feel very well. 5/5

Aww this is such a sad poem, but its greaty written and full of emotion just wheeled me in and made me want to read more. The rhyming was great. Loved the flow of the poem.
Great Work

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