I have read one of your poems, and i have become addicted to your poems. Each and every one of them holds meaning. I love reading them all of them! Good job and keep it up! =]
5/5

Another good example of the Licentia Rhyme style.

I love the way you use the descriptive words and adjectives. It adds so much to the poem. There was one word that I thought could use another look though. I dont think that CAFFEINE and EYES join together very well. It took me several attempts to try to visualize CAFFEINE EYES, but finally I did. Its just a personal opinion, but I would suggest trying to replace that one word.

Moving on, the rest of the poem was great. I love the powerful words like EMBRACE and DISGUST and GUARANTEE and FLUTTERING etc. It added so much meaning to the poem that I knew that you really put your heart into it (or your one of THOSE that I just comes to right away).

Lastly, i love the very last word of the poem. It left a considerable impression in my mind about the entire poem.

Great job.

Jenni, this is an extremely impressive poem, for the form as well as the poem itself. The form is really cool, I've never seem a poem quite like it. There are so many lines that I really enjoyed within this.

All day long could gaze into those caffeine eyes

^^this is one of my favorite lines. It's such an interesting picture, caffeine eyes? I feel like that could mean a lot of different things, it's quite a cool saying.

Heart fluttering as tender kisses I taste

^^I also really love this line, it's sweet. This entire poem is very sweet and seems to hold a lot of passion and care from your part.

I also counted all the syllables and such and it's perfect. Love the rhythm as well. (: